Some people have benefited from modern communications technology, but some people have not benefited from it at all.

Practice this IELTS Writing Task 2 question on IELTSX. Some people have benefited from modern communications technology, but some people have not benefited from it at all.

Benefits of modern communications technology for all people or selected groups - IELTS Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words.

A student's answer to this task, and the feedback on it

Written by an IELTSX user under exam conditions and published unedited and anonymously. Band 7 ยท 282 words.

### Benefits of Modern Communication Technology

Modern communication technologies, such as smartphones, social media and video-conferencing applications, have transformed the way people interact with each other. Some people believe that these technologies benefit everyone, while others argue that their advantages are limited to certain groups. In my view, modern communication technology provides significant benefits to most people, although some groups gain more from it than others.

One major benefit is that communication has become faster and more convenient. People can instantly contact family members, friends or colleagues regardless of geographical distance. For example, video calls allow people who live in different countries to maintain close relationships without travelling. This is particularly beneficial for international workers, students and families who are separated by long distances.

Another important advantage is improved access to information and professional opportunities. Students can attend online classes, access educational materials and communicate with teachers from almost anywhere. Similarly, employees can work remotely and participate in international meetings without being physically present in an office. Businesses can also communicate with customers around the world, which can increase their potential markets.

However, the benefits are not equally available to everyone. Elderly people and those living in areas with poor internet access may struggle to use modern communication tools. In addition, people with limited digital skills may find smartphones and online platforms difficult to use. Therefore, some groups may experience fewer benefits than younger and more technologically experienced users.

In conclusion, modern communication technology offers major advantages, particularly by making communication and access to information easier. Although certain groups may benefit less because of age, location or digital skills, I believe that these technologies have improved communication for society as a whole.

Examiner feedback

The essay effectively addresses all parts of the task with a clear position, logical organization, and a good range of vocabulary and grammar. It demonstrates consistent control throughout, comfortably achieving a Band 7.

Task Response - 7

- Addresses all parts of the task clearly and presents a consistent position. - Develops main ideas about benefits and accessibility issues effectively. - Supports arguments with relevant examples.

Coherence & Cohesion - 7

- Logically organizes information and ideas with clear progression. - Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately. - Maintains a clear central topic within each paragraph.

Lexical Resource - 7

- Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary for flexibility and precision. - Incorporates less common lexical items with awareness of style. - Maintains high accuracy in spelling and word formation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy - 7

- Uses a variety of complex structures with frequent error-free sentences. - Demonstrates good control of grammar and punctuation. - Errors are extremely rare and do not impede communication.

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